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[[MAC8]Origins]

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I left this on, I LOVE it literally, nice creativity, i can imagine this:
0:00 to 0:30 I suspect my girl to have cheated on me, but I have no proof, just by the way she is talking, I can see it, though..
0:30 to 0:40 She's saying the phrase. She admits it. As soon as she starts her sentence, i can feel it..
0:40 to 1:03 I CANT STAND IT! she actually did.. OMG I'M SO MAD!!!!!!!!
1:03 to 1:13 I'm planning to beat his face up, I have a plan.. TO BLOW HIS ASS Up!
1:13 to 1:45 I run to school, because i know He is there, I run as fast as i can, with my hands harder than rock
1:45 to 1:55 I open the door of the school, I look around, I see his friends,
1:56 to 2:07 I see his face, anger EATS ME.. I WANT TO FUCK HIS FACE UP!!!!!!!
2:07 to 2:50 CRAZY FIGHT, punchs, kicks, anything.. Suddenly (2:50) hope is lost, he thrown me to the ground
And again (3:00 to 3:02 reversed reverb) I see my girl, and his smile, with his friend, him smiling, mine too... I can't stay on the ground, I HAVE TO FIGHT!

And until 3:38, fight again, till 3:34 where I get punched so hard, that I forget everything, sadly, I have noticed life can be hard like a brickwall

haha let myself go on that story! :P really nice song, I had nothing to say about the sound itself (mixing) so I hope this does it ! =)

Mrmilkcarton responds:

Hope its not reflective of your life. :P

[When Robots Walk {Tell/B195}]

Yeah i can see some music in there

Since I've been pretty mean in my other review on one of your song, I tried to seek something that is good to review it, and that's it... A nice song overally but sounds are a bit thin, try mixing it more... maybe SOME notes are off too, but it doesn't matter dissonance is not resonance in this case! :P
The song is quite progressive, but it got old on some places.I liked the fill on 1:08 (which came back a few times too)

I still think you should add alot more instruments, buildup, effects and stuff, but you're probably learning so 5/10 for effort.. keep it up and whenever you want an honest review for a song, just PM me!

Telliath responds:

haha thanks for the reviews :)

[{WF1/Tell}Wonderful Millennium]

this is awful

I felt like I was slowly dieing of aids and something was eating me from the bottom of my feet to my head while listening to this.. this is awful there's absolutely no music it's just random pads and bass ... it felt like you took your program and added all presets together to make something cacophonic and retarded

well maybe my mind is not "open" enough.. Sorry if that offended you but I had to say what I felt.. I guess I just can't like all genre of music
(I'll still add you 5/10 cause I know you worked for this and it's job..)

Telliath responds:

it's alright. thanks for th review.

[Star_Crossed_Demo]

wow first? Lol

heard this in a clip like a few months ago from envy lol cool stuff really

Desyre responds:

Thanks!

[[dj-J] Purification of Flavour]

nice song

Haha yeah I dig this but I think the bass is way too low you can't really ear the note is on.. try putting less filtering or add another bass ontop of it... hmm other than this well add some stress to the lead buildup like when you filter it but in the start when it goes from simple to more complicated

jkrox4eva responds:

alright thanks man =] will do.

[Exotic Trance]

haha nice

found myself looping this while talking on msn, when i removed my headset and went upstairs i was whistling the melody :P very cool concept

Maxim456 responds:

Well Thank you
I feel happy to satisfy you

[Tetris Remix Demo Loop]

yeah fine

calm down the phaser stereo field on the bass cause its removing lotsa strength of the kick, maybe remove some release on the 14 sec lead.. also try layering your lead with some other sounds so it sounds stronger.. or maybe add reverb, delay, chorus, phaser.. etc..
it cant loop well though because the structure is like:
main lead+kick/ weird synth+break/ main lead+break

DjGamah responds:

It loops fairly well in FL studio... and the kick is buried right now i know, i haven't mastered any of the levels, but the intent is to have a very powerful "kick-bass" Thank you EVERYONE for the comments/rates.

[Janze - Night club]

summary

great kick dude not sure about bass tho, sounds too disco but i like the main nexus leads :p
kewl melo also =)

DJ-Janze responds:

thanks :) tryed to EQ it good. is the bass too low ?

[~EnV~ Imagination (Preview)]

full song, love it

Huh wasn't this supposed to be your coop?
anyway nice production very diverse and strong i love the arps going very low with that piano playing and then the come back.. end.. duh
very hands upish synth...HaH i know what's wrong.. THE CLAP IS NOT BIG ENOUGH T_T
Dude listened it like 5 times... I'm downloading this finally something who is not SO bad from you *cough*awesome*cough*.

Envy responds:

Nah, I havnt heard much about my collab... Oh well, this was a side project that turned into my main project haha.

Hm bigger clap eh? Indeed.

Thanks for the review man.

I'll talk more on msn, writing a paper now though