Like your style alot
This is definitely a good song, yet I can see you lacked of some work on some parts.. Love the melo, at the end you should have mixed it with a square lead (which i thought you did hearing the small filter :< )
the structure of the song isn't rock hard, the main part should come twice or something like buildup, main, buildup, main..
yours was more like
1.Build up (kick bass... snareeee)
2.-Bang sudden intro who doesnt match with the first part- (that hit wasn't necessary either, sounds ridiculous)
3. Main part
4. end
Hook me up with your MSN if you have one I'd like to talk to you, oh and don't check my audio here it sucks badly
(Just realised I reviewed something 1 year old.. oh well)