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I like the melo from Rob, the sounds bla bla
but you did an extremely huge error with the stereo field
lemme explain myself...
by putting a delay on the stereo you are, first, making the sound alot more distorted, kinda like taking a rock and crushing it to sand.. and second you are making the brain of the listener thinking the sound is coming from one of the sides (left?).
so next time you master a song, either remove the delay on the side, either add it to individual instruments, but i think this doesn't fit on a lead, a bass or a kick.. might just be me tho.. try getting a pair of headphones too they help alot with stereo